short vid with attempted burnout

[Twister]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_PJcVPfTdWk

just haven a lil fun before the invos I got from VPA go on

 

[Timnineside]

A solid start my friend!!!! Looks like it going to be some fun!

 

[DMan]

I give your film production a 10.

 

[JohnnyViper]

I would love to see this rival the other viper burnout video, I think the quality of the video needs to be better it seems off for some reason, I like the mask idea but if you are going to do it in this fashion there has to be some mini story rolled in which I think would add to the uniqueness and character of this video. I also think the location could be better....i know its not easy to find a spot to play around in. One thing I really liked it the camera shot that swooped down that is something the average joe can not do.....i look forward to another version

 

[Twister]

Thanks....heres a version with a slight change of the masked character....Ilike this one better

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TRhDm497u5A

......

 

[mad0953]

Both are totally bitchin'

 

[M_viper]

nice vid

so someone else posts up your clips?

 

[Twister]

my friend who made the vid

 

[Makara]

Nice effort. You might want to try a reedit and build up to something. At the moment it feels a little anticlimactic. Take out the burnout as the first shot. A burnout seems to be what you are working your way towards as the payout. If it were me, I'd take out the RSKY productions title card. It doesn't do anything to add to the video and unless it is a real production company, it really shouldn't be in the video and doesn't add anything to it. Think about the masked character and what you are trying to do with it. Maybe work with that in the buildup. It is cool to see the camera moves. Try stabilizing them in post to take out the shake. That helps a ton for these types of shots.