Personally, and to each his own, I don't see it. Boyish if you ask me. But, then again, you did not.
In all seriousness, the Editor of VIPER did a great job in the layout of the article, and while it is fairly heavily edited, it still reads well.
The article in the fall issue is a bit more serious...or at least it has more of a message.
The editor promises a very exciting summer issue (his way of saying that I'll not be in it).
May a pox fall upon his village.